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Tread along and walk alone..!!
Jan 18, 2005 05:17 PM 2786 Views
(Updated Jan 18, 2005 05:39 PM)

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This is a small poem I wrote for the book The Alchemist:-


Lone and forlorn trudged the warrior


Unruffled by the treacherous vagaries


Uncaring of the perils ahead


He walked along to a realm beyond.


Passersby gazed as he walked along


Wondering what hid beneath the outer façade


What indeed is the man within?


Is he, was he, the same, times before?


They thought, they pondered, as he walked along.


Long ago in a village forbidden


A light had shone as darkness veiled


A wind had blown, a wind of change


Lo what had happened, did people ask


Somewhere it was the birth of the warrior


Which brought joy and bask.


Jovial kids had their share of fun


They chirped and cheered as carefree souls


When they made merry he looked askance


He gazed at the stars and mulled


Hidden treasures it seems he culled.


Days heaped into months and


Months piled into years as he grew along


He learned things and he grasped nuances


As the world became his learning guide.


When the world moved with their daily lives


As people grappled with existence chores


He was thinking and growing within


Moments passing by molding him.


He wasn?t afraid to ask and question


Hearing to the voice within


To what it told and what it asked


It said things which none could have


And asked, what shook him to rave.


The answers led to further doubts


A trickle soon became a waterspout


An inflow of ideas, of truths uncovered


Life taught him what no book could have.


Along the way he met a light of intellect


Who pushed him and nudged him on


He would say look for the light and


Don?t you stop until you talk to the soul


The warrior was asked to recollect


Jostled to think and to act.


He traveled far and wide


Leaving his trail as he walked along


He found love and money as he moved along


Men of fiber enriched his soul


Men in need drew strength from him


But none could put a brake in his flight


A journey that he had long begun


Uncaring of the perils ahead


He walked along to a realm beyond


A realm of charm and wealth


A realm with path strewn with thorn


Uncaring unmoved walked the warrior along


Conquering bounds both within without


Inspiring and calling men to shake off


To walk alone and tread along?.


P.S. I am trying something different with the book review on this one, do let me know how you liked it, feel free to shower praise if I so deserve and dont hold back if you want to criticise it, your views would help me do better.


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