Jan 02, 2012 12:04 AM
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The second book in Deb-Avantika Trilogy has little to do with either Deb or Avantika. To know more about first book and these two you can read my review here.
Story revolves around four people from different walks of life who come together at a Finance firm and become friends. Story then carries on to their friendship, break-up and eventually there becoming friends again. There is loads of romantic angles to the story and hint of lust too.
The book suffers the same flaw as the first one and more. Story is narrated by Deb and frankly, narrative is pretty flat. There are loads and loads of grammatical mistakes. Sentences don't make any sense at times. For example, " The jet had was slowing down",
"There would a few more in his garage" & "are you will give buy him that too?" Seemingly no one pointed it out for the first book and hence the problem was never corrected. Unlike the first book, there are no witty one liners that can make you smile.
I finished the book because I had to. Not because book was good or something but because it is against my principles to leave any book unread midway.
If you are turned off by bad language, grammar, lousy narrative and flat story, I suggest you keep your hands off the book.
