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Being Thirty... a poem

By: austen_inspired Verified Member MouthShut Verified Member | Posted Dec 11, 2008 | General | 317 Views | (Updated Dec 11, 2008 05:24 AM)

( I know I've already posted on my birthday but I was inspired to write a 'retourne' on the subject, a French form poem written in quatrains with an odd repeating pattern of the lines of the first stanza. I hope you enjoy it, as the form was a bit fun to work with.)


O’ face reflected by mirror…


It seems you’re not aging, but ‘sage’.


The appearance of Youth fading;


Leaving room for that more lasting.


It seems you’re not aging, but ‘sage’…


Able to observe with reason;


Able to hold back an impulse;


I see my mother’s best features.


The appearance of Youth fading…


How glad am I to let it go;


Naturally and slowly so,


Gliding along as an adult.


Leaving room for that more lasting,


I abandon frivolity;


Revel I instead in walking


Through the happy halls of my home.


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